中高考閱卷老師揭秘——英語作文這樣寫才能拿高分

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中高考閱卷老師揭秘——英語作文這樣寫才能拿高分
作者: 二毛

寫英語作文，總是會(huì)不經(jīng)意的蹦出一系列類似口語化的簡單表述，于是就被閱卷老師認(rèn)定為英語水平不那么高……為了讓閱卷老師見識(shí)到我們的“真實(shí)水平”，著實(shí)需要下一番功夫，比如可以從把簡單句變“高級(jí)”開始。
中高考閱卷老師揭秘——英語作文這樣寫才能拿高分
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形式 “活” 起來

插入 在句中插入某些成分，起補(bǔ)充、說明作用。最明顯的特征是被插入成分前后都用逗號(hào)隔開。
You and I are teenagers. It offers teenagers a chance. We can enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.
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It offers teenagers, like you and me, a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.

嵌入 在某一分句中嵌入另一分句，構(gòu)成句中句。最常見的情況是：定語從句嵌入賓語從句中、感嘆句嵌入賓語從句中、名詞性從句嵌入強(qiáng)調(diào)句型中。

We are told something. We doubt whether it is true. We are in the habit of raising doubts. We can find the correct answer. We can learn more.
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If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.

前置 將正常詞序下通常較晚出現(xiàn)的成分移至句首，使之處于突出的位置從而受到特殊的強(qiáng)調(diào)，這種手段為前置。
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity. I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public by offering my service.
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I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

后置 在遣詞造句時(shí)將最重要的內(nèi)容置于句尾，使之處于突出地位，這種手段為后置。故造句時(shí)應(yīng)避免頭重腳輕，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的勻稱。在名詞性從句中，借助it作形式主語或形式賓語，將真正的主語或賓語后置；在同位語從句中，主語太長而謂語太短，將同位語從句后置；使用全部倒裝，將主語后置。
The test will enhance the examinee's consciousness of health. On the contrary it will also be more likely to result in over anxiety. People all said that.
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It's said that the test will enhance the examinee's consciousness of health, but on the contrary it will also be more likely to result in over anxiety.

同位 對(duì)與之同位的名詞或短語提供補(bǔ)充說明的成分稱之為同位語，可以是一個(gè)詞也可以是一個(gè)完整的句子。為表示同位概念，也可使用連接性狀語namely / that's / in other words / such as 等，還可使用破折號(hào)表示。

DNA test is a new technique. It is done by analyzing the saliva sample. It appears in the foreign medical industry.
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DNA test, a new technique, which is done by analyzing the saliva sample, appears in the foreign medical industry.

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內(nèi)容 “實(shí)” 起來

01 詞匯的升級(jí)
(1) I think that reading is important.
→ I deem that reading is essential / fundamental.
→ I argue that reading really matters /counts.
→ I maintain that reading is crucial.
→ I hold that reading is significant /primary / critical.

(2) We can look at this problem in many ways.
→ We can view this problem in many facets / aspects / respects.

02 單詞和短語巧妙互用
(1) I think that reading is important.
→ I hold the belief that reading plays an important role in our life.
→ I harbor the opinion that reading is of vital importance.
→ I hold the position that reading means a great deal to our life.
→ I am under the impression that nothing is more crucial to our life than reading.
→ From my perspective, reading is to our life what water is to fish.
→ As far as I am concerned, the importance of reading to our life can never be exaggerated / denied / ignored / doubted.

(2) I will never forget the pleasant experience.
→ The pleasant experience leaves a deep impression on me.
→ The pleasant experience is deeply / firmly rooted in my memory.
→ The pleasant experience will never be fading from my mind / memory.

(3) I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.
→ It is my sincere hope that you will take my proposals into account /consideration.

(4) Quite a few things caused the traffic accident.
→ Quite a few things triggered the traffic accident.
→ Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic accident.
→ Quite a few things lead to / result in the traffic accident.

(5) I love reading.
→ I am crazy about / fond of / into /feel like reading.
→ I possess great interest in reading.
→ Reading exerts a tremendous fascination on me.
→ I am obsessed with reading.
→ I am captured by reading.

03短語的升級(jí)
(1)try to do sth→ take pains to do sth→ do one’s utmost to do sth→ exhaust every effort in one’s power to do sth→ spare no effort to do sth→ go all out to do sth
If I am lucky enough to be chosen to become a volunteer, I will do my utmost to serve the children in the remote areas.I will spare no effort to build the hope into a bridge between the children in the remote areas and the volunteers like me.In order to make it a better place for us and children, I will exhaust every effort in my power.

(2)have to→be forced to do sth→be obliged to do sth→ have no choice but to do sth→have no alternative but to do sth
Some poor students have to do some part-time jobs to earn money in order to continue their education.Some poverty-stricken students have no choice but to do some part-time jobs to earn money in order to continue their education.


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